College Not Combat -- Feedback requested
**Update: The sound has been fixed**
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Hey, this is a piece that I'm submitting to Current TV for their contest that's due tomorrow, May 20th. I'm planning to add a voice-over at the beginning of the piece, but haven't had the chance yet. Please. Please. Give me feedback about how I can improve this piece. Thanks. email@example.com
Thanks so much for any feedback you can give!