Thursday, May 19, 2005

College Not Combat -- Feedback requested

**Update: The sound has been fixed**
**Update: The next entry has the latest version of the video, click the picture to see.**

Hey, this is a piece that I'm submitting to Current TV for their contest that's due tomorrow, May 20th. I'm planning to add a voice-over at the beginning of the piece, but haven't had the chance yet. Please. Please. Give me feedback about how I can improve this piece. Thanks. inthecity@sbcglobal.net


Thanks so much for any feedback you can give!

9 Comments:

At 6:15 PM, Anonymous liz said...

Was it supposed to have sound? Am I doing something wrong?

 
At 6:32 PM, Anonymous Chris said...

I have to agree with Liz, I only had a few seconds of any kind of audio there at the beginning. Intentional? The footage is pretty good...but I feel like I'm missing half of a story

 
At 6:34 PM, Blogger owen said...

yes sound cuts out about 15 seconds into the piece. i'm running a mac too!

 
At 11:34 PM, Blogger Jay Dedman said...

works for me.
current should be proud to have you make video for them.

 
At 12:08 PM, Blogger R said...

Josh, this is great. The voiceover works. The only thing I would add is captions of the names of the some of the people speaking in the video if you have them. Hope you get selected in the contest!

 
At 8:53 AM, Blogger sull said...

scary.
good work.
good luck.

 
At 10:15 PM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

Be a real man or woman and do something for your country. Don't just be a taker. If you don't think this country is worth fighting for then get out!

 
At 7:06 PM, Blogger Doug said...

How does the person that posted befor think that fighting in Iraq is fighting for America? Was Iraq ever found to have connections to 9-11? NO!, Did Iraq attack America or Americans? NO!, Did Iraq ever pose any threat to being able to invade the US? NO! Was anyone losing sleep worrying about Iraq's next move or pending invasion of the US? NO! George Bush used the emotions and anger after 9/11 to push his own agenda in Iraq. All he had to do was muster up some lies about WMDs and sell it all to the senate and the public. If he was so concerned about our real enemies he'd be taking a good hard look at Saudi Arabia, the country where 16 of 19 of the 9/11 hijackers came from. but then they have all the oil and ole George W. in their back pocket.

 
At 12:28 PM, Blogger Insurgent said...

Anonymous -- I'm so tired of people telling me that if I'm not happy about this country, why don't I leave.

For my response -- please check out this video: Declare Your Independence.

 

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